My stop motion project is done and online. You can visit the YouTube link below to check it out. Post here and let me know what you think.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4uPyyxf7jMk
...Here's the updated link - http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jrsvLCOgFJQ
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My Stop Motion Project
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My Stop Motion Project
by Affinity on Mon Jan 16, 2012 10:56 am
Last edited by Affinity on Wed Jan 18, 2012 8:46 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: My Stop Motion Project
by Kristopher on Mon Jan 16, 2012 12:10 pm
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Uh, please tell me you are doing this to become rich and famous....
Uh, please tell me you are doing this to become rich and famous....
Affinity wrote:My stop motion project is done and online. You can visit the YouTube link below to check it out. Post here and let me know what you think.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4uPyyxf7jMk
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Re: My Stop Motion Project
by Gonzo on Tue Jan 17, 2012 10:17 am
Really well done, Aff, with one exception being the ending -
Is that so?
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Re: My Stop Motion Project
by Affinity on Tue Jan 17, 2012 11:12 am
What didn't you like about the ending?
I admit I ran out of steam and was eager to call it done. Being rather close to the end of the song it seemed fine to have it essentially trail off to an end.
Just a thought but if you have suggestions for a proper ending, and if they appeal to me, I might update the video and upload it again.
I admit I ran out of steam and was eager to call it done. Being rather close to the end of the song it seemed fine to have it essentially trail off to an end.
Just a thought but if you have suggestions for a proper ending, and if they appeal to me, I might update the video and upload it again.
"We are game-playing, fun-having creatures, we are the otters of the universe. We cannot die, we cannot hurt ourselves any more than illusions on the screen can be hurt." - Richard Bach: Illusions
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Re: My Stop Motion Project
by Gonzo on Tue Jan 17, 2012 5:47 pm
well, I think you need some sort of a finale..maybe a trick ending...like up into a tree, or perhaps something like a disappear act (heh)...maybe something with a well...I'm looking for a dramatic climatic ending...let it go as it is, lull allong, just to the point of boredom, then whamo...I'll leave the definition of "whamo" to you...
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Re: My Stop Motion Project
by Affinity on Wed Jan 18, 2012 8:50 am
Challenging to come up with a "whamo" but I worked up an ending. Nothing fancy, just a bow.
Here's the new link if you want to check it out... http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jrsvLCOgFJQ
Here's the new link if you want to check it out... http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jrsvLCOgFJQ
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Re: My Stop Motion Project
by Gonzo on Wed Jan 18, 2012 10:13 am
Muy bueno...I like it - did I miss the The End in leaves before? Nice touch
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Re: My Stop Motion Project
by Affinity on Wed Jan 18, 2012 10:38 am
Nope, "The End" at the end is actually tree bark and is new. I think it does give the video a more complete feel so I appreciate your feedback. I just couldn’t do a whole lot out in the woods with one minute remaining so I went with the t-shirt thing to try and add a little action to close it out. Thanks again!
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Re: My Stop Motion Project
by Kristopher on Wed Jan 18, 2012 11:25 am
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A proper ending may be a big stop motion kiss on your boyfriends lips.
It's nice you've 'come out of the closet' so to speak. Homosexuality is nothing to be ashamed of.
A proper ending may be a big stop motion kiss on your boyfriends lips.
It's nice you've 'come out of the closet' so to speak. Homosexuality is nothing to be ashamed of.
Affinity wrote:What didn't you like about the ending?
I admit I ran out of steam and was eager to call it done. Being rather close to the end of the song it seemed fine to have it essentially trail off to an end.
Just a thought but if you have suggestions for a proper ending, and if they appeal to me, I might update the video and upload it again.
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